Great job!
It's really well mixed, it's what we NG audio artists crave for! Great job with the transformation too! The only thing I can ask for: Some variation in the lead melody (lead guitar and piano). You could go in and out of tempo with some more passion on the lead guitar, and this would be a GODLY song! If you can solo a bit on the guitar, that of course would improve the song a lot, too. Just get outside of the eights/quarters on the melody. It leaves me wanting more originality.
Great job, I'm bookmarking you!