Score: 7

"Bahahaha my song!"

submission: Chrono Trigger R+J style

date: June 11, 2008

So this is a school project or something? Pretty cool that you did it in the setting of Chrono Trigger :) I like it! But it loops at the end, and the music doesnt stop...just overlaps itself. Kind of amateur-looking, just to let you know. Thanks for using my song :)

Score: 8

"Very well done"

submission: Dad's Home

date: April 8, 2006

Your artistic style is really bold, which I normally don't like--however, you made it fast-paced and clean, so I really enjoyed this animation! I didn't think it was very funny, but it was sure a great movie! I love how you ended it :D your 3D animation for the rising of the stage was awesome :D

-BTW, that song at the end is indeed from F-Zero...it's actually the Mute City theme. Try getting a midi of it at vgmusic.

Score: 10

"haha, very nice!"

submission: A Men's Room Monologue

date: April 8, 2006

This was amazing, great job! Great graphics! The voice acting was kind of mediocre, but the whole flash was awesome! I'm glad you didn't neglect sound effects, it really seals the deal. Keep it up, and make more!

Score: 8

"Nice job"

submission: The AP: Highlights

date: April 8, 2006

A great idea for a flash, you really did well with this. Overly satisfying...but the animation was kind of choppy, does that mean there's not as many frames or something? IDK, I'm no flash artist.

Great job here.

Score: 8

"Pretty good public service announcement"

submission: Music = Color

date: April 8, 2006

Well done. I don't really get the first part, but it's cool. An overall satisying clip.

-That rock looks like an...

Score: 7

"I like the cinematic approach!"

submission: two brothers

date: April 7, 2006

I really like the emotion your flash gives! However, there's a few things I have to comment on:
-The music seemed fitting, but the song was certainly flawed. Someone said it was from "Samarai Shampoo" or something, but the singer kind of distracted me from the movie.
-The lack of sound effects was really painful. I understand you want to keep it silent for climactic tension, I agree with you there. But maybe it'd be cool to have some sword clings and a final stab sound effect? That'd really seal the deal.
-You art is really unique. I like the style. You could slow it down a little, and use more frames for each animation I guess. It almost reminds me of a flip-book. But in a movie-sense. I liked it.
-The window was pretty small.
-I didn't like how the white/paper background would disappear and reveal that stone grey texture every now and then. Kind of distracted me.
-A little storyline might be nice. Unless you just neglected that because it's a test.

My review seems harsh, but I'm too lazy to put all the good things :). It really was a great flash. But I just threw out some things that might make it a great flash movie. It has potential! Keep it up.